Week 12.1 Feedback

1.About the posters:

Just be careful about the green color on the left, it looks a bit like app about environment.
There are too much elements on the second poster (too many things is happening) and the photo does not fit the content (The QR code might not be necessary and the photo could be just people holding a photo).
The Nest and Bird is riligious(like something about Christian).

2.The Event:

The pattern on the first photo does not speak what the event is about.

3.The app:


To show the concept, it is better to show the pages that is useful rather than all the page.
The app icon is unnecessary.
It is better to show the app on a real photo to see whether it works (At least one page). The text on the community page looks too small.

4. Apart from all of that above, there could be one page about the brand design.
My tutor suggests that the logo looks like an empty nest now and it needs birds to show it is a bird's nest.
I also tell him the concept that the nest is also a metaphor of network that students connected to each other. He suggests that i should stick to the idea of place for student to stay.